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PlutoSquared | *Edit* |
Randall | OMG! That is so freakin' good! Loves it! ------------------ "All deaths are suicides, do you realize that? Every single one. The only distinction is that, with some people, suicide is a subconscious choice, and with others it's a conscious choice. Otherwise, those who commit suicide and those who succumb to accident, illness or "old age," die for exactly the same reason: belief in the inevitability of death." Linda Goodman |
PlutoSquared | quote: Originally posted by Randall: OMG! That is so freakin' good! Loves it!
Thank you very much, Randall. |
Randall | When did you write it? |
PlutoSquared | The night it was posted. |
Randall | I love the banter in it. ------------------ "All deaths are suicides, do you realize that? Every single one. The only distinction is that, with some people, suicide is a subconscious choice, and with others it's a conscious choice. Otherwise, those who commit suicide and those who succumb to accident, illness or "old age," die for exactly the same reason: belief in the inevitability of death." Linda Goodman |
Quinnie | I have to agree with Randall. This is seriously greeat poetry |
PlutoSquared | quote: Originally posted by Quinnie: I have to agree with Randall. This is seriously greeat poetry
Thanks Quinnie. |
Randall | It's very Linda-esque. ------------------ "All deaths are suicides, do you realize that? Every single one. The only distinction is that, with some people, suicide is a subconscious choice, and with others it's a conscious choice. Otherwise, those who commit suicide and those who succumb to accident, illness or "old age," die for exactly the same reason: belief in the inevitability of death." Linda Goodman |
Virgo-AriesArtist | quote: Originally posted by Randall: It's very Linda-esque.
I think so too, PltuoSquared And your use of images is what seals the deal |
pixelpixie | Great piece! |
PlutoSquared | Thanks Pixel. |
pixelpixie | You are really a terrific writer! You got me thinking about writing again, and searching out my old poems. You should post more poetry here! |
ghanima81 | Wow. This is so poingnant and close to home for me. Wow. Truly impressed. |
Ami Anne | I have been reading your poetry for a while. I was too stubborn to tell you HOW much I loved it ------------------ If you forgive men their trespasses, your Heavenly Father will forgive you But if ye forgive not men their trespasses,neither will your Father forgive your trespasses. He who controls his Spirit is greater than he who controls a city Proverbs |
PlutoSquared | Thanks Ghanima, VirgoAriesArtist, and Ami Anne... I'll try to post some more things, soon. Glad you all enjoy |
Ami Anne | This is so beautiful that I am crying.I want to write like this.I want to say it, talk about it. I want to put it in to words so I can get it out of my heart but I CAN"T I am not talented like you are PS but I can let you say it FOR me. Say it G/f. I need to hear. I need to hear and I am listening .------------------ Throw away your books and listen to your heart.Listen the closest when it hurts the most. He who controls his Spirit is greater than he who controls a city Proverbs |